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APPLE_TAINTED_KISSES

APPLE_TAINTED_KISSES (PG)
Written by ZB24

The crew of six were sitting on the couch together watching a movie. Unfortunately, today was Tora's turn to pick a movie. For whatever reason, Tora seemed to have made it a mission to pick the most suck-ass film know to man. It was some terribly old black-and-white American war film with bad actors. The guys seemed to be getting into it (or at least tolerating it), but she was bored to death. About thirty minutes into the film, she stood up and said, “I'm going to cut some apples now. Do you guys want any?” The “guys”, transfixed on the film's subtitles, shook their heads “no”.

She sighed wearily as she entered their kitchen. She pulled out four apples from the fridge, rinsed them, and began to peel off their somewhat bitter skins. She was only on her second apple when she heard footsteps coming up from behind her. She paused as she watched Hiroto walk to the other side of the island and prop his elbows on the edge of it. He was right in front of her, eyes aimed upwards, meeting hers.

“Movie bored you huh?” Hiroto said, casually.
“Yes~ I hate war films.” she stated.
“I don't particularly like them myself.” Hiroto said, standing up, elbows locked, hands spread out on the pale countertop.
“Hm.” she acknowledged with a nod of her head, still scalping that apple.
“Can I have one?” Hiroto asked, gesturing at the apples.
“Yup.” she said, setting down the newly peeled apple and cutting off a slice of the newly stripped mass.
He picked it up, ate it thoughtfully, and then said, “I can see why you like these things.”
“They are great aren't they?” she said with a smirk.
“Not as great as you.” he responded, locking eyes with her.
“What are you saying~?” she said, darting her eyes away and laughing nervously.

She had finished peeling the apples and was beginning to cut them, placing them in an orange plastic bowl four pieces at a time. She said nothing when Hiroto ate another slice and closed his eyes as he chewed.

He turned to face her as she stood at the sink behind him. Her hands carefully working over the knives and cutting board, rising off the traces the apples had left behind. She almost bumped into Hiroto when she turned around to take a paper-towel in her wet hands and dry them, Hiroto watching the whole time.

“Time to go back to 'old black-and-white movie' land. Fun fun!” she said sarcastically with a chuckle.
“Or,” Hiroto said, grasping her still damp hands, “How about something even more entertaining?”
“Like what? What are you up to?! You know I-” Hiroto cut her off as his lips made contact with hers. She couldn't do anything at first, shocked by his action and paralyzed by the fear of being caught by the four guys on the other side of the wall. But soon, she succumbed to Hiroto's affections. She kissed him back; hesitantly at first, then intensely. She showed no indication of protest when Hiroto's hands let go of hers to loop themselves around her soft waist. And Hiroto, extremely pleased with himself, kissed her harder when her hands came up between them to hug his neck. One of them (and no one knows who) started drifting backwards and before long, her hips were firmly pressed against the edge of the counter.

Then, Nao noticed that two certain people were missing. He heard the sound of feet shuffling across the kitchen floor, a small thud, and a giggle. He elbowed Shou who started laughing under his breath.

“ARE YOU GUYS GOING TO WATCH THIS MOVIE OR KEEP MAKING OUT ALL OVER THE KITCHEN?!” Saga shouted at them, a smile in his voice.

She looked down, embarrassed but smiling. Hiroto, arms still around his girlfriend, looked up and directed his voice towards the living room.

“We'll just say in here! Together! Making out!” Hiroto shouted back. The sound of roaring laughter came out of the living room as Hiroto started to walk away. She snatched Hiroto's warm hand, pulling him into her. He smiled as she grasped his chin, bringing his lips towards hers. When their mouths collided, she could swear she tasted the slightest hint of Gala apples on his tongue. She couldn't help but smile as Hiroto's hands slipped across her back and the sounds of the movie played in the background.

“Tora, thanks for picking such a suck-ass movie!” she thought, secretly.

This is the first fanfiction that I have publicly posted. I hoped you liked it. Please comment! (^_^)

Comments

I loved it!! So sweet and cute. You have a way with words, very well written. Yay for alice nine het!!

Now if only someone besides myself would do Nao/OC. hah

Hope to read more of your stuff!
Can we be friends!? hehe.
I'm really glad you liked it! (^_^) I really appreciate your compliment.

I will keep Nao in mind for the next fanfic I write. I always neglect Nao, though not on purpose. (T_T)

I got your request and added you as a friend. (^_^) Thanks.

~ZB24~
Yay!! I'm glad you'll keep Nao in mind. The poor guy never gets enough attention. haah.
I'm happy that you appreciate my comment. Makes me glad. :)
Nao-san is the cutest. He surprises me at times in photos when he looks HOT cuz he's usually cute all the time to me. ^_~

NUMBAH SIKSU XDDD
OH YES! I LOVE THAT VIDEO! {I have it on my iPod.}

HAHA~! It was so random when he walked up to the camera and did that. I just about died laughing! The other guys didn't know what to do and just sat there in shock for a while. ROTFLMAO~~~

Nao is such a nice, funny, caring guy. *sigh* (^_~)

~ZB24~
Yes!!
Ahh! It's so cute when he speaks English!!
Have you heard when he says "Do You Love Me?" Cutest thing ever! But yes, he can look quite hot in some photo's.
awwww so cute!
lol saga “ARE YOU GUYS GOING TO WATCH THIS MOVIE OR KEEP MAKING OUT ALL OVER THE KITCHEN?!"
hiroto's response XD
That's my favorite part of the fanfic right there. XD

Thanks for commenting. (^_~)v Arigato Gozaimasu~

~ZB24~
This is so cute! ♥0♥

Cute Hiroto, I should say. A-and good job for Tora for picking such a suck-ass movie! XD
Thank you! m(_ _)m

~ZB24~
I really enjoyed this! RoRo-chan is quite the kisser ^_^ Try one with Tora! *drools* I'd love you forever.
I'm glad you liked it!

Yes... but, looking at Hiroto.... doesn't he seem like a good kisser? XD

I'll consider Tora for the next fanfic I write. (^_^) Tora's my 3rd favorite (after Hiroto and Saga).

~ZB24~
Hanna,

I while ago, I wrote the Tora fanfic that you wanted. I just forgot to contact you because I couldn't send you a private message. (T_T)

Anyway, hopefully this comment will reach you...

>> http://zb24.livejournal.com/2046.html

~ZB24~
I saw this link on soompi.^^
Been in love with fanfics for almost a year now.^_^

I love your story so far^_^

So kawaii!!!!!! so cute!^__^
Saga made me laugh!

Pls add me as friend, if its ok with u^_^
I remember you're username from Soompi, too. Hi Hi! (^_^)/

I used to read fanfiction occasionally, but I didn't really like it until last month. (o_o) Maybe it's the effects of J-Rock or something. Haha~

I'm glad you liked my story~ I didn't expect so many people to like it. (-_-;) I'm no complaining though. XD

I added you. (^_^)v

~ZB24~
Ahh, I'm also writing fanfics. But I'm still not yet confident to post them on net. haha! My grammar sucks.^^


It's so rare to find fanfics with Jrock artists in it.
T___T
I love reading fanfic when the characters are Jrock artists. especially the gazette and alice nine.^^

Goodluck to your fic!

Please... finish this.. I'm begging u!
Well whenever you decide to post one, let me know. I'd love to read it. (^_^)

There's actually thousands of J-Rock fanfics. BUT, less than 5% of those are "Het". So I read the Yaoi and sometimes change it to het in my head. LOL~ Yaoi doesn't really bother me anymore [as far as reading goes], but I've only written het.

Well actually, this one is already finished. I hadn't planned on continuing it. But, I've been trying to think of ideas for the next one. I will definitely write another eventually.

Which J-Rocker would you want to see in the next one angel_teuki? The others have said Nao and Tora already. I'm planning to include one of you guy's selections in the next fanfic I write. (^_^)

~ZB24~
Where can u read jrock fanfics?
I can't find in soompi. T_T
Almost are Kpop fanfics. I love them too. but jrock is the best for me.^_^

Yaoi doesn't bother me too. I love reading Yaoi.kekeke.^_^

You will really include the one I will choose???
Weeeeeeeh! ^____^ that's sooo sweet. ^_^
Thank u!^_^
Hmmmm.... let me think.. haha!
So hard to choose. hmmm... --_--
I like the 'Nao and Tora' idea too.

probably, either Saga or Uruha.
I like them both^^
Either the two, it's ok.

THANKS SO MUCH! THANK U!!^_^

I'll surely read your next fic^^

anyways, please update soon..^^ I'm so excited about the next chapters^__^
I read them all here at LJ. Here's some communities that are nice and I recommend:

http://community.livejournal.com/aliceinloveland/
http://community.livejournal.com/alicenine_yaoi/
http://community.livejournal.com/jrockyaoi/

These are some people in particular I like reading:
http://community.livejournal.com/cobalt27fiction/
http://pink-hairxtie.livejournal.com/12132.html

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Hehe~ Yes I will. I don't know anything about Uruha, so I'll include Saga. (^_^)

You're welcome.

I'll try my best to update soon. As soon as I formulate a good idea I'll write it out. I've been thinking of different plots while I'm exercising or in the shower. XD Nothing good yet, but it'll come. LOL~

You're so excited! ROTFL~

~ZB24~
waaah! You're the best!!!
Thank u so much for the links!

T______T I'm the happiest person now!
Thank u! ^_____________^

LOL~ Thanks! (^_^)

You're welcome, I'm just glad I could help. (^_^)

~ZB24~
mmm...wouldn't i love to taste a piece of that. *dirty thoughts* j/k, but i wouldn't mind either.